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The Healer: intro redo

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Didn't want my marker skills to get rusty, so I redid the back to back art nouveau piece of the Healer. The characters are Adam and Xertis.
Image size
4389x6244px 12.45 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon MG2500 series
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Neicha-chan's avatar
Hello !
I'm Nei from feedbackplease

I like the composition, it's giving me a bit of a tarot vibe. 

Proportion wise I find you heads a bit big, you've kept the  the rest of the proportions fairly realistic so think about lengthening your bodies a bit. Right now they seem to be about 5,5-6 heads tall (average  real life proportion is around 7-7,5 ) you don't have to go by the realistic ones if you like slightly cartoon-ish proportions but maybe think about balancing it out =) 

What type of markers are you using? 
Also what type of paper?

If you can afford it, I'd suggest you look for marker paper specifically, it'll help your markers last longer and reduce the patchiness the big filled areas sometimes have. Also won't bleed as much so you can be more precise with your shading. 

If not maybe use some photo editing software to reduce some of the patchy areas. I think your drawing would pop out a lot better that way =)

I like the flow in the female character's hair + scarf? cape? 

Linework looks pretty clean from what I can see. 

Well that's about it, if anything I said sounds unclear/ needs further explanation please let me know !

Good job keep it up.